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Maria A replied to the topic Any good proofreaders in our midst? in the forum Open Discussion 7 years, 2 months ago
Ok, just went through the protein guide and here are a few of my suggested edits:
- Page 11 section “Complete vs. Incomplete Proteins” 1st sentence – delete space before the word “Remember”.
- Page 18 under “Advantages” 3rd bullet down after “hungry” word should be “OR” not “OF”
- Page 20 1st bullet a period is needed at the end of the sentence
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Maria A replied to the topic Any good proofreaders in our midst? in the forum Open Discussion 7 years, 2 months ago
As proofreading was a major part of my job, I may be able to help. Any edits I will post here (read messages above).
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Nikki Massie replied to the topic Any good proofreaders in our midst? in the forum Open Discussion 7 years, 2 months ago
I want every good eyeball that is willing! Just remember to post your edits here. I’ll lose them otherwise!
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Mary Grisaffi replied to the topic Any good proofreaders in our midst? in the forum Open Discussion 7 years, 2 months ago
Nikki if you need anyone else to proof read I will do it for both books..
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Donna replied to the topic Any good proofreaders in our midst? in the forum Open Discussion 7 years, 2 months ago
I’ll also had more eyes
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Nikki Massie replied to the topic Any good proofreaders in our midst? in the forum Open Discussion 7 years, 2 months ago
Cool! You can put any edits you find here. I forgot to mention that. Thank you!
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Susan Sheipe replied to the topic Sue’s Week Sep 25 – 30 in the forum Weekly Action Plans 7 years, 2 months ago
Just reread my post. Didn’t do so well. I got to bed by 2 a couple of nights, but didn’t fall asleep until 4 am this morning. Tonight is the night I need to go to bed early, so I’m not sure how well that’s going to go.
i managed more fluids almost every day, but only reached 60 on 2 days.
I didn’t get much done in the house. One of my c…[Read more]
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Blanche J replied to the topic Any good proofreaders in our midst? in the forum Open Discussion 7 years, 2 months ago
I’d be happy to proof read for ya!
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Nikki Massie started the topic Any good proofreaders in our midst? in the forum Open Discussion 7 years, 2 months ago
I’m putting the finishing touches on two new ebooks that will go up for sale on Bariatric Foodie (remember, you guys don’t have to buy those because you’ll get access to them as part of your membership).
I’ve got final drafts and I’ve looked at them TOO many times! So I need different eyes on them. I’m going to post the links to them below. Here…[Read more]
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Nikki Massie replied to the topic October 1 in the forum Daily Check-Ins 7 years, 2 months ago
Must be something in the air today @robin-miller I feel sort of like you do today.
Just got back from church which was amazing, as always. I’m a bit out of sorts on a few things emotionally but it’s nothing a good walk, some time with my journal, and support call won’t fix!
Today I’m going to be a home body. It’s cool out so I’m itching to…[Read more]
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Nikki Massie started the topic September 30 in the forum Daily Check-Ins 7 years, 2 months ago
Well I don’t have much to report from yesterday as I spent much of it in a medicated haze!
I feel better today but my neck still hurts. I think it’s a combo of my mattress and sleeping positions with this expander on my right side.
I’m about to get up and make jelly! Concord grape jelly that is. Then cleaning and then I have to take the girl…[Read more]
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KathyP replied to the topic Kathy's Plan 9/25-10/1 in the forum Weekly Action Plans 7 years, 2 months ago
I appreciate your perspective.
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Nikki Massie replied to the topic September 29 in the forum Daily Check-Ins 7 years, 2 months ago
I came down with some sort of 24 hour bug. I was on the live show last night but in reality I was feeling more and more awful by the minute! Ugh. Started as a headache. Then progressed to neck ache and extreme chills. Came home and did meds and bed. Woke up once last night completely covered in sweat. Now I’m awake and feel better although…[Read more]
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Nikki Massie replied to the topic SueO's weekly plan September 24-30 in the forum Weekly Action Plans 7 years, 2 months ago
Mid-week Sweep!
You keeping up those good habits? And how are you feeling?
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Nikki Massie replied to the topic Kathy's Plan 9/25-10/1 in the forum Weekly Action Plans 7 years, 2 months ago
I suspect that this is because you are exercising a “pass/fail” mentality. The rest of your report back seems to indicate that as well.
So let’s take some time to do a bit of re-framing:
- I wasn’t able to get my work priorities straightened out due to circumstances that were largely under my control, but I was able to cope through and…dang…
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KathyP replied to the topic Kathy's Plan 9/25-10/1 in the forum Weekly Action Plans 7 years, 2 months ago
hmm, I kind of wish I hadn’t posted…
I had to be at work at 5 am on Wednesday. Monday I didn’t shop, and I don’t remember why. I think I worked late. Tuesday I had a business dinner. Wednesday I left work at 4:30, so that was over 11 hours. So I collapsed on the couch and caught up with TV. I had leftovers from the business dinner Tues for…[Read more]
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Nikki Massie replied to the topic Robin's Week of September 24-30 in the forum Weekly Action Plans 7 years, 2 months ago
Mid-week sweep!
This has been a week for you! You started off cautiously hopeful and now you know what life is going to look like, at least for the next two months.
My advice to you: you’ve been great at establishing core habits. I have a feeling those are the things that make you feel like “you.”
Hold tight to those! Make a list of your…[Read more]
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Nikki Massie replied to the topic Kathy's Plan 9/25-10/1 in the forum Weekly Action Plans 7 years, 2 months ago
Mid-week Sweep!
I’m especially interested in #’s 4 & 5 but a report on all would be nice.
I assume you’re still breathing because I’ve seen you on social media this week. 😉
I hope you’re well! <3
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Nikki Massie replied to the topic Sue’s Week Sep 25 – 30 in the forum Weekly Action Plans 7 years, 2 months ago
Mid-week Sweep!
How are things going? I can’t tell whether it’s this past Sunday or the one coming up where you need to go to bed early (I think it’s the one coming up). How is your phased in sleep plan coming along?
I’m so glad your shaking has calmed down. I experienced first hand how limiting it can feel to be “doped up,” as you put it. Not…[Read more]
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Nikki Massie replied to the topic Maria's plan 9/24 – 9/30 in the forum Weekly Action Plans 7 years, 2 months ago
Sounds like you’re doing great! Thanks for checking in!
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